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mayaechovisariPersonal Information
Name: dark
Age:30
Personal Journal:darknessred
Email / Plurk / Discord / Other: Same as John Connor Account
Current Character(s):
John Connor
Character Information
Character Name: Maya “Echo” Visari
Fandom: Killzone: Shadowfall
Character History: You have two options for the history requirement:
http://killzone.wikia.com/wiki/Maya_%22Echo%22_Visari
*Raised on New Helghan in the year 2366 to the Helghan leader, Hera Visari. And granddaughter to the Visari Clan which is a big family name in Helghast history.
*Maya is raised in a secret boarding house where she has extremely limited contact with her mother, presumed to be trained as a spy for the Helghast.
*Maya came back to New Helghan when she was 16 years old becoming more of a marksman and having combat training. She now works for Commander Anton Saric infiltrationing anti-government groups.
*She is traded in a prisoner exchange for Lucas Kellan as normal, until a explosion caused confusion and aims a gun at Lucas after seizing his own weapon from his hands. She spares Lucas’s life and goes back to the Helghast.
*A second comfortation with Lucas is on the ISC Cassandra, a ISA ship that fell into the hands of the Helghast as Dr. Hilary Missar experiments on Helghast for her own sick pleasure. Echo has Missar put away only for the female Doctor to explain why her blood is so different than other Helghast. She tells Echo she is half-Vektan as well. After a brief talk, Massiar is dragged away.
*Echo finds Lucas in his cell, tortured by the Helghast and tells him she means no harm to him. Echo wanted to find out more info about the Black Hand group as much as Lucas did.
*She demands to hear who Tyrone was working for and finds out he’s working for Jorhan Stahl.
*Echo questions her mom and what did she get in return for his loyalties. Her mom slaps her for questioning and says she only wants to protect her people on the political side.
*Echo holds the ISA Agent and Messar at gunpoint after fighting off waves of Helghast soldiers. She reveals she can’t live with herself after Massar wants to create something bad to kill everyone even half-breeds.
*Lucas’s Shadow Marshall director points at Echo and growls telling Lucas to shoot Echo for killing Massar. If he sides with Echo, he cannot guarantee Lucas’s safety.
Character Personality:
Maya is from a long line of Helghast aristocrats and politicians. She, however is a hybrid of both species even though she doesn’t know her Vektan father. She shows pride in her people just like her ally Lucas, however it will take a lot of willpower to even get her to change her mind once her mind is made up. She is passionate about ending the war between the two factions that she will take out both sides if that means achieving her goals.
Her anger is reflected in the crosshairs of a sniper rifle. This means if you make her angry, you will find yourself at the mercy of a sniper rifle shot from a distance.
However, Maya hides a side of her that nobody except Lucas Kellan knows about. She is a enemy you don’t want to have. Her peaceful side gives way to someone who will rip you apart for a cause even if that cause kills everyone in the process.
In fact, she admits later in the game Lucas and her are now on the same side, due to both being outcasts of their kind, willing to throw aside their differences in race and work together to finish the war.
Maya is half Vektan and Half Helghan, her traits make her stand out among the others.
She supports peace through being a rebel even though she’s at the wrong point in her job. She fierly
Please be as detailed as possible so that we have a good picture of the character. What makes this character tick? What are their strengths and weaknesses? Minimum three paragraphs.
Powers and Abilities: Echo is a elite half-Helghast and half- Vekta hybrid spy working for the Helghast. Her skills include hacking, endurance, espionage, and she is a expert marksman with a sniper and a few other weapons. She is great at hand to hand combat, and using a knife. She knows the areas well enough to tell someone directions like the back of her hand. She also uses her cloak for infiltration purposes.
Samples
TDM posts (unless it's for Network), links, and examples for posts from other communities are not accepted.
Network: Your network sample entry should be made as if your character were posting to a public network, such as Dreamwidth. It does not have to be their first post (ie, "OMG WHERE AM I?!"), but it does have to show that the character is perfectly aware of the fact that this is something that other people are likely to see. Please avoid excessive use of descriptions in [action tags] here, as one would get in video posts - we're looking for your character's voice, the one they use for talking to others. Save the internal monologues for the third person sample.
[The camera shakes a bit and reveals a red hooded woman trying to readjust it]
...This is “Echo” speaking.
There must be some mistake here.
“I need to find Shadow 1-8, now.”
This is of urgent importance. If he’s found, the Helghast will..”
SHIT!”
[The camera is suddenly and mistakenly shut off as Echo’s anonymous name fades from the network]
If you use TDM for your network sample it needs to meet the following requirements:
* Taken from the Test Drive Meme for The Wake and not any other game
* Contains at least 12 comments from the character being applied for
* Contains enough material for us to see how the character is like
* Has to reflect their first person voice
Third Person: 300 word minimum. This is the place to show your character's inner thoughts within the setting. Give us a nice third person narrative of your character doing something, plus how they feel about it. This doesn't have to be blatant "this is what my character is thinking, designated by italics!" but should rather show your character's self via their actions and interactions with their environment.
Echo carefully sits on top of a building, studying someone who meant to make her angry through a crosshair of a sniper rifle, trying to get a good aim on the person. She is under her cloak.
The person seemed like they weren’t paying attention, and Echo hoped that the enemy was stupid enough not to move from that spot. Even if they did, she’d adjust her plan accordingly.
Some others had convinced her to learn bending instead of relying on old fashioned future technology. She had declined several times saying she was a spy and she would do it on her own terms.
She’d learn to handle herself just like the Helghast did, eventually with or without Lucas.
This enemy was spurring her on and insulting her which didn’t help her anger any.
A distant smash in a window was heard from whomever was paying attention from a distance but whomever who would find themselves a target wouldn’t hear the silent snipe as they fell to the ground.
The Half Vektan/Half Helghast spy didn’t feel bad or alarmed for her actions due to what she did every day in her job.
She wrote a separate thing on a pad of paper. It was full of notes, maps and directions of this Nautilus. She wanted to find out everything she could about this place. Its people, its problems.
After her deed was done, she dragged the body in between the forest, somewhere dark to test the waters.
After she hid the evidence, she disappeared again, making a checkmark on her own “personal mission checklist.”
As soon as she reached a quiet place, she appeared with a small smile on her face.
She realized she missed Lucas, and he had changed her for the better and the worst. Who knew at that point?
Name: dark
Age:30
Personal Journal:darknessred
Email / Plurk / Discord / Other: Same as John Connor Account
Current Character(s):
John Connor
Character Information
Character Name: Maya “Echo” Visari
Fandom: Killzone: Shadowfall
Character History: You have two options for the history requirement:
http://killzone.wikia.com/wiki/Maya_%22Echo%22_Visari
*Raised on New Helghan in the year 2366 to the Helghan leader, Hera Visari. And granddaughter to the Visari Clan which is a big family name in Helghast history.
*Maya is raised in a secret boarding house where she has extremely limited contact with her mother, presumed to be trained as a spy for the Helghast.
*Maya came back to New Helghan when she was 16 years old becoming more of a marksman and having combat training. She now works for Commander Anton Saric infiltrationing anti-government groups.
*She is traded in a prisoner exchange for Lucas Kellan as normal, until a explosion caused confusion and aims a gun at Lucas after seizing his own weapon from his hands. She spares Lucas’s life and goes back to the Helghast.
*A second comfortation with Lucas is on the ISC Cassandra, a ISA ship that fell into the hands of the Helghast as Dr. Hilary Missar experiments on Helghast for her own sick pleasure. Echo has Missar put away only for the female Doctor to explain why her blood is so different than other Helghast. She tells Echo she is half-Vektan as well. After a brief talk, Massiar is dragged away.
*Echo finds Lucas in his cell, tortured by the Helghast and tells him she means no harm to him. Echo wanted to find out more info about the Black Hand group as much as Lucas did.
*She demands to hear who Tyrone was working for and finds out he’s working for Jorhan Stahl.
*Echo questions her mom and what did she get in return for his loyalties. Her mom slaps her for questioning and says she only wants to protect her people on the political side.
*Echo holds the ISA Agent and Messar at gunpoint after fighting off waves of Helghast soldiers. She reveals she can’t live with herself after Massar wants to create something bad to kill everyone even half-breeds.
*Lucas’s Shadow Marshall director points at Echo and growls telling Lucas to shoot Echo for killing Massar. If he sides with Echo, he cannot guarantee Lucas’s safety.
Character Personality:
Maya is from a long line of Helghast aristocrats and politicians. She, however is a hybrid of both species even though she doesn’t know her Vektan father. She shows pride in her people just like her ally Lucas, however it will take a lot of willpower to even get her to change her mind once her mind is made up. She is passionate about ending the war between the two factions that she will take out both sides if that means achieving her goals.
Her anger is reflected in the crosshairs of a sniper rifle. This means if you make her angry, you will find yourself at the mercy of a sniper rifle shot from a distance.
However, Maya hides a side of her that nobody except Lucas Kellan knows about. She is a enemy you don’t want to have. Her peaceful side gives way to someone who will rip you apart for a cause even if that cause kills everyone in the process.
In fact, she admits later in the game Lucas and her are now on the same side, due to both being outcasts of their kind, willing to throw aside their differences in race and work together to finish the war.
Maya is half Vektan and Half Helghan, her traits make her stand out among the others.
She supports peace through being a rebel even though she’s at the wrong point in her job. She fierly
Please be as detailed as possible so that we have a good picture of the character. What makes this character tick? What are their strengths and weaknesses? Minimum three paragraphs.
Powers and Abilities: Echo is a elite half-Helghast and half- Vekta hybrid spy working for the Helghast. Her skills include hacking, endurance, espionage, and she is a expert marksman with a sniper and a few other weapons. She is great at hand to hand combat, and using a knife. She knows the areas well enough to tell someone directions like the back of her hand. She also uses her cloak for infiltration purposes.
Samples
TDM posts (unless it's for Network), links, and examples for posts from other communities are not accepted.
Network: Your network sample entry should be made as if your character were posting to a public network, such as Dreamwidth. It does not have to be their first post (ie, "OMG WHERE AM I?!"), but it does have to show that the character is perfectly aware of the fact that this is something that other people are likely to see. Please avoid excessive use of descriptions in [action tags] here, as one would get in video posts - we're looking for your character's voice, the one they use for talking to others. Save the internal monologues for the third person sample.
[The camera shakes a bit and reveals a red hooded woman trying to readjust it]
...This is “Echo” speaking.
There must be some mistake here.
“I need to find Shadow 1-8, now.”
This is of urgent importance. If he’s found, the Helghast will..”
SHIT!”
[The camera is suddenly and mistakenly shut off as Echo’s anonymous name fades from the network]
If you use TDM for your network sample it needs to meet the following requirements:
* Taken from the Test Drive Meme for The Wake and not any other game
* Contains at least 12 comments from the character being applied for
* Contains enough material for us to see how the character is like
* Has to reflect their first person voice
Third Person: 300 word minimum. This is the place to show your character's inner thoughts within the setting. Give us a nice third person narrative of your character doing something, plus how they feel about it. This doesn't have to be blatant "this is what my character is thinking, designated by italics!" but should rather show your character's self via their actions and interactions with their environment.
Echo carefully sits on top of a building, studying someone who meant to make her angry through a crosshair of a sniper rifle, trying to get a good aim on the person. She is under her cloak.
The person seemed like they weren’t paying attention, and Echo hoped that the enemy was stupid enough not to move from that spot. Even if they did, she’d adjust her plan accordingly.
Some others had convinced her to learn bending instead of relying on old fashioned future technology. She had declined several times saying she was a spy and she would do it on her own terms.
She’d learn to handle herself just like the Helghast did, eventually with or without Lucas.
This enemy was spurring her on and insulting her which didn’t help her anger any.
A distant smash in a window was heard from whomever was paying attention from a distance but whomever who would find themselves a target wouldn’t hear the silent snipe as they fell to the ground.
The Half Vektan/Half Helghast spy didn’t feel bad or alarmed for her actions due to what she did every day in her job.
She wrote a separate thing on a pad of paper. It was full of notes, maps and directions of this Nautilus. She wanted to find out everything she could about this place. Its people, its problems.
After her deed was done, she dragged the body in between the forest, somewhere dark to test the waters.
After she hid the evidence, she disappeared again, making a checkmark on her own “personal mission checklist.”
As soon as she reached a quiet place, she appeared with a small smile on her face.
She realized she missed Lucas, and he had changed her for the better and the worst. Who knew at that point?
